fateful loss of hope, by lost the lonely dead
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depression in recession a master craft we weave
Undisturbed Mentality is Jaded Melodic Fallaciousness
a silence brought on as soul detaches from flesh
detached torn from feeling numb and not wanting to be
Perfect peace is a fate hopeless lost forever |
| Posted: 2006-04-25 20:56:40 UTC |
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| 2006-04-24 14:12:42 | lost the lonely dead |
| i added it in thanks for the input, i keep telling myself that one day i will finish this and then i never do |
| 2006-05-12 23:42:57 | Faith |
| It seems complete enough to me... short, simple, and it really packs an emotional punch. |
| 2006-05-15 07:34:55 | lost the lonely dead |
| thanks faith i just wrote it undsure of wear it was going or why i was writting it so yeah but evidentally people wrote stuff |
| 2006-12-06 03:09:11 | User |
| This is short but filled with wisdom..very well written too.. |
| 2006-12-12 02:34:58 | lost the lonely dead |
| thanks id like to build on it some more but just havent had any ideas lately |