fateful loss of hope

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By lost the lonely dead •

depression in recession a master craft we weave Undisturbed Mentality is Jaded Melodic Fallaciousness a silence brought on as soul detaches from flesh detached torn from feeling numb and not wanting to be Perfect peace is a fate hopeless lost forever

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April 16, 2006 05:32Loneliness is condescending

Undisturbed Mentality is Jaded Melodic Fallaciousness

April 24, 2006 14:12lost the lonely dead

i added it in thanks for the input, i keep telling myself that one day i will finish this and then i never do

May 12, 2006 23:42Faith

It seems complete enough to me... short, simple, and it really packs an emotional punch.

May 15, 2006 07:34lost the lonely dead

thanks faith i just wrote it undsure of wear it was going or why i was writting it so yeah but evidentally people wrote stuff

December 6, 2006 03:09User

This is short but filled with wisdom..very well written too..

December 12, 2006 02:34lost the lonely dead

thanks id like to build on it some more but just havent had any ideas lately