*Love at 15* (4), by *****Junior Walker*****
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I love you
I love you too
If I broke up with you
I don't know what I'd do.
The feeling of affection for life,
That this girl is the one I want to be my wife.
Isn't it inevitable this spell will wear off?
Even though it feels nothing like puppy love.
She says "I'll love you forever"
And I feel the same about her,
But growing up we'll both change
So saying that now seems so strange.
I can only hope these feelings are here
This time next year.
I never want to loose her,
Even now I wish I was with her.
I hope I'm with her next time I read this
I hope I am while you read this
It remains to be seen
Whether love can last at 15.
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| Posted: 2007-02-02 17:51:33 UTC |
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| 2005-12-04 22:21:06 | waterlily |
| this made me giggle at the begginning...makes me think of being in love at ten..fifteen...my favorite dance at 15...i like how you write down your emotions so easilee..'can only hope these feelings are here this time next year.." it makes me sad in spots...i dont want to B reminded of 15 |
| 2005-12-11 04:37:46 | love nothing >>-- |
| This is good, I can relate, and this is coming from a guy's pov, right? yea, that makes it all the more awesome...9 all the way |
| 2006-09-25 18:15:06 | Dimplegirl |
| nice poem... you are a good writer... it takes alot to right down your thoughts. =) |