Bye bye bye, by My_pain_your_thrill |
Raise me up, Just to tear me down, Commit to me, Just to fool around, Make me laugh, Just to make me cry, Make me live, Just to let me die, Make me weak, While I am strong, I am vulnerable, And you string me along, Knock me down, When I least expect it, Drag me through again, You are so pathetic!! And see me here, Falling down again, Nothing more than an outlet, For your own pain, But you know what? I don’t even care anymore, You’re in my heart, But here’s the door, If all you can do is lie, Then I’m sorry mother, But bye bye bye. |
Posted: 2005-12-06 19:40:22 UTC |
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2005-12-06 21:38:53 | Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~ |
this is extremely well written seriosuly your work should be published its so emotional and everyone seems to relate to you so well you have such a raw talent its excellent xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
2005-12-18 02:51:53 | Faith |
So powerful and wrought with strong emotion... i like it a lot! |
2006-02-01 09:58:08 | Aims |
Wow, I can totally relate to this one. Really well done. |
2006-02-18 19:18:51 | Jessicaa |
You are really good! Very, very good work! Best poem I read! Really! |
2006-08-28 22:39:06 | .:side:walk:. |
cool. |
2007-04-22 19:57:38 | a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad. |
i agree absoulutly amazing |
2007-07-14 18:32:07 | maleena |
nice poem id feel ur pain read minds |
2007-07-20 19:20:15 | hersheys |
A wonderful piece,a worth to keep. Keep it up! |
2009-02-10 00:42:45 | 00YuviDani00 |
Amazing1!! I love it!!! (p.s plz read some of mine and comment) but thats not y im commenting so GREAT JOB!!!!1 |