Bye bye bye

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By My_pain_your_thrill

Raise me up, Just to tear me down, Commit to me, Just to fool around, Make me laugh, Just to make me cry, Make me live, Just to let me die, Make me weak, While I am strong, I am vulnerable, And you string me along, Knock me down, When I least expect it, Drag me through again, You are so pathetic!! And see me here, Falling down again, Nothing more than an outlet, For your own pain, But you know what? I don’t even care anymore, You’re in my heart, But here’s the door, If all you can do is lie, Then I’m sorry mother, But bye bye bye.

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this is extremely well written seriosuly your work should be published its so emotional and everyone seems to relate to you so well you have such a raw talent its excellent xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

December 18, 2005 02:51Faith

So powerful and wrought with strong emotion... i like it a lot!

February 1, 2006 09:58Aims

Wow, I can totally relate to this one. Really well done.

February 18, 2006 19:18Jessicaa

You are really good! Very, very good work! Best poem I read! Really!

August 28, 2006 22:39.:side:walk:.

cool.

i agree absoulutly amazing

July 14, 2007 18:32maleena

nice poem id feel ur pain read minds

July 20, 2007 19:20hersheys

A wonderful piece,a worth to keep.
Keep it up!

February 10, 2009 00:4200YuviDani00

Amazing1!! I love it!!! (p.s plz read some of mine and comment) but thats not y im commenting so GREAT JOB!!!!1