I am not fucking invisible!!, by My_pain_your_thrill
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I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE
Why can you not see?
All the potential,
I have within me
I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE
Open up your eyes!
See me here below,
Where all my shame lies,
I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE
You can’t just ignore,
I have so much missing,
But I can gain so much more,
I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE
So how can you think I am?
You think I’m not worth it,
But I’m doing what I can!
I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE
But you think you’re way up high,
Better than her and me,
But you are NOTHING in our eyes!
WE ARE NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE!!
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| Posted: 2007-08-21 00:08:34 UTC |
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| 2005-12-08 01:57:33 | Rilla |
| Nice message. Love the line "I have so much missing, but I can gain so much more" Could be a lot stronger if you allow more thoughts and longer lines. Great poem! |
| 2005-12-13 02:05:57 | waterlily |
| my old lover is definitelee invisible..but visbill in other ways..that smart ass rascall! |
| 2005-12-13 13:59:07 | My_pain_your_thrill |
| This isn't about a lover, it's about lecturers at college looking down on you.. |
| 2006-01-06 21:43:26 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| I can rellate to this poem for when I was in college my classes were held in rooms where the Prof was centered in the room below us,yet it felt like he was elevated and looking down.Thank God I finally got my eyes off his status and stature and back onto my studies! :D Good Poem!er.. exception of a few choice words.. (pun intended,if no harm done!) :D |
| 2006-01-25 23:09:11 | love nothing >>-- |
| im replying to what u said to my friend 'live_laugh_love'----Why dont you write your own poem about how u feel about God instead of bitching at her for her beleifs?! ACK! |
| 2008-02-04 18:21:27 | Mollzyyx |
| WOW took my breath away i think it is soo amazingg. Read my poems and plleasee give me some tipss! x |
| 2008-02-10 10:15:21 | Invisible Poet |
| hey think you could take a look at my poems i cant get them to show up on the list authors just check them out, nice poem strong words but nice nontheless |
| 2008-03-15 03:18:57 | Firec |
| very blunt, but very good! |
| 2008-06-02 02:41:05 | Nora Eason |
| this poem had too many curse words in it to be a good poem. |
| 2008-12-23 14:47:48 | Packspoet2000 |
| i like this poem.... It has alot of deep strong emotion... I thought it was about a lover untiul i read the comments... Still it is very strong and well written... And as for those people complaining about the swear words.... There is a swear word clearly visable in the title of the poem.... if you are offended by swear words why read a poem with one in the title :S anyway.... i love this.... Good job :) |
| 2009-06-08 16:43:45 | Craney |
| Nicely developed poem. |