I am not fucking invisible!!

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By My_pain_your_thrill •

I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE Why can you not see? All the potential, I have within me I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE Open up your eyes! See me here below, Where all my shame lies, I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE You can’t just ignore, I have so much missing, But I can gain so much more, I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE So how can you think I am? You think I’m not worth it, But I’m doing what I can! I AM NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE But you think you’re way up high, Better than her and me, But you are NOTHING in our eyes! WE ARE NOT FUCKING INVISIBLE!!

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December 6, 2005 21:40Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~

this is strong who are we aiming this message at?? xxxxxxxxxxxx

December 6, 2005 22:06My_pain_your_thrill

college!!

December 8, 2005 01:57Rilla

Nice message. Love the line "I have so much missing, but I can gain so much more" Could be a lot stronger if you allow more thoughts and longer lines. Great poem!

December 13, 2005 02:05waterlily

my old lover is definitelee invisible..but visbill in other ways..that smart ass rascall!

December 13, 2005 13:59My_pain_your_thrill

This isn't about a lover, it's about lecturers at college looking down on you..

January 6, 2006 21:43 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I can rellate to this poem for when I was in college my classes were held in rooms where the Prof was centered in the room below us,yet it felt like he was elevated and looking down.Thank God I finally got my eyes off his status and stature and back onto my studies! :D Good Poem!er.. exception of a few choice words.. (pun intended,if no harm done!) :D

January 25, 2006 23:09love nothing >>--

im replying to what u said to my friend 'live_laugh_love'----Why dont you write your own poem about how u feel about God instead of bitching at her for her beleifs?! ACK!

February 4, 2008 18:21Mollzyyx

WOW took my breath away i think it is soo amazingg. Read my poems and plleasee give me some tipss! x

February 10, 2008 10:15Invisible Poet

hey think you could take a look at my poems i cant get them to show up on the list authors just check them out, nice poem strong words but nice nontheless

March 15, 2008 03:18Firec

very blunt, but very good!

June 2, 2008 02:41Nora Eason

this poem had too many curse words in it to be a good poem.

September 20, 2008 13:31Marie Baigrie

i really like this 1 xxx

December 23, 2008 14:47Packspoet2000

i like this poem.... It has alot of deep strong emotion... I thought it was about a lover untiul i read the comments... Still it is very strong and well written... And as for those people complaining about the swear words.... There is a swear word clearly visable in the title of the poem.... if you are offended by swear words why read a poem with one in the title :S anyway.... i love this.... Good job :)

March 9, 2009 00:53SAMIRA JONES

I LIKE IT SO POWERFUL

April 6, 2009 14:39Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

this is really good

June 8, 2009 16:43Craney

Nicely developed poem.

October 30, 2009 19:29*+*+barbed+*+*wire*+*+*

you are ausomn!