*Ready to Die* (11)

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By *****Junior Walker***** •

I’m ready to go I swear to God death is calling me Dealing with the same feelings As Jesus at the Garden of Gethsemane If only you knew what it felt like To feel nothing Seeing death around every street corner And just waiting The most tempting thing in the world Is suicide And I would Have tried But all I could see Was my father’s eyes The facial expression Of when your youngest son dies But I looked life in the eye And asked “Is this all there is?” He laughed then said “no, there’s much more Heartache and pain to come than this.” So I’ve been drop calling death back every night Texting at every opportunity Saying I won’t put up a fight If you want me, come get me.

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December 7, 2005 18:08 *****Junior Walker*****

Lucid Dreamer,Im writing this here taking a gamble that your gonna read it,you've given me so many kind words and i've never got to thank you,You said your going to stop using this site so I doubt you'll be checking your comments,So writing here is the best idea I could come up with,I'd love to talk to you someday,My e-mail address is SACJU15@aol.com

December 8, 2005 01:27waterlily

i know how you feel...suicide is the best solution sometimes..that is...if you dont botch it up and end up worse than bfore

December 8, 2005 14:07EmbraceLucidity

as a matter of face ,j u r right, i have only been checking back to see if u had any response...

December 8, 2005 14:17EmbraceLucidity

as a matter of face ,j u r right, i have only been checking back to see if u had any response...

December 20, 2005 18:14love nothing >>--

ty but that was one of my worst but i really love all your poems

December 22, 2005 05:12 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

check out this poem on here titled "My Fathers Eyes",by Jansen,under list authors. alot like this poem of your too! both are great poetry!

February 9, 2006 02:30ChuKico PrIme

let's face the fact that life is never perfect. sometime suicide seems like the only solution. but think about the great things that i'm sure you have. as no one is perfect, there's always somethings special in every one. like you being able to write such a great poetry out of such pain. :) think in 'half-glass-full' way. once you can solve your problem, you get to the higher level of living your life and it makes your realize how much fun life can have once you achive your goal.
oops. i'm not talking to 'you' ok. i'm talking to the person in your poem. lol :D but it's a nice poem buddy.
-- ChuKi --

July 28, 2006 08:56User

Like a battle to either kill yourself or murder the devils within you that wants you to do so...well,I hope is the later...you wouldn't want to make the devil smile right..??

September 4, 2006 03:15A Lonely Song

I really love this. It's extremely relatable. Great job. You've definitely succeeded in writing something important.

September 30, 2006 15:55 *****Junior Walker*****

tnx for all the comments,ChuKico-PRIME,its not really me,its kind of one particular place in my mind that this comes from,tnx

April 26, 2007 22:21A Lonely Song

i added you on myspace =]

September 6, 2009 02:08(darkkisses)

nice poem you should check out my poems if your into goth/emo poetry.