sacraments, by Loneliness is condescending
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A heart of spyglass fragments
I will be the face of your affication
with a shapeless heart
Was this your game, your fantasy
Left out in the cold
A puzzle never ment to be solved
Visions from grace
let me stay unloved |
| Posted: 2005-12-21 01:07:24 UTC |
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| 2006-03-22 17:49:21 | lost the lonely dead |
| awesome cool great im leaving comments cause loneliness is condescending and it makes your comment count go up and make ya look cool cause you really are most people are silly and blind wow im rambling wipppppeeeeee josh is going crazy blah blah blah um i remember when you said you were going to write something with 'a heart of spyglass fragments' and i know it says you want to stay unloved but no matter how far you run i dont think youll ever get away from it, death himself doesnt even hold the key to being released from love, a friend of mine died and i still remember her love her think about her miss her good job on this poem though |
| 2006-05-09 23:15:42 | Faith |
| I think it's a beautiful poem, i love the emotion! |