Me and I

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By bedazzled

"Ah I see", I said to me, "I don't", said me to I, "I don't understand what you're trying to say, All your words are lies", "I do not lie!" said I to me, "Why would I lie to you?" "I don't know" said me to I, "But that is what you do", "I am strong" said I to me, "On me you can rely", "Rely on you?!" said me to I, "That I can deny", "Well!" said I, "I disagree, With all you have to say to me, I am superior in every way, So why should I listen to what you say?" "Well!" said me, "I comply, You seem much more confident than I, But I see all the things you hide, Hidden in the depths of the girl inside", "I'm so sorry" said I to me, "If only we listened once in a while", "I'm sorry too" said me to I, "Then maybe we'd have less tears to cry". ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Get it? It's a conversation between the inner-child and the outer-person. Between the way I appear to others and the hidden depths of my personality. I never listen to the quite thoughts in the back of my mind, I lie to myself to make everything seem alright. But maybe, just maybe, if I learned to tune into that voice then I would caus myself so much misery.

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December 13, 2005 12:10 *****Junior Walker*****

Quality poem,I like what you did there,anyone who can pull that off without seeming crazy is a good poet