Take Me Along(21)

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By <font color= "white"> ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ •

<font color="navy"><i><b> If you ever leave me take me along, Dont try to work this life out alone. Whether I am there,or here's no big deal, Just take me with you in memory,if you will. All of the breaks and questions in time All of the absence and hurting entwines It makes my mind fuzzy ,and my heart beat too fast, but without your memory I know I can't last. I don't think our love will ever be broken, My heart stands itself a monumental token so take me with you where ever you go , My love is yours and this you must know! © Copyright 2005 Glostarg All rights reserved.

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December 14, 2005 17:47Faith

You are such an amazing poet... and you always find ways of encouraging others in their poetry. I only wish that i can encourage you the way you encourage me...

December 14, 2005 18:37 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Oh Faith! Your such a blessing yourself! even your name speaks it! so have Faith,Faith :) you are such a good poet yourself!thank you so much for all of your coments and encouragments. it means alot to me!

December 17, 2005 18:10Spiritual Beauty

I love it so much!

December 17, 2005 22:06 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Spiritual beauty,Thanks much! :)

December 18, 2005 18:57Crimson.Wings

beautiful poem i like it

January 2, 2006 18:25 Kirsty (living in the light)

Glostarg I love your poetry and can see how you love God. I use my poetry and other talents to glorify God, I can see that your poems also Gorify God. Hey Gloria is a song. Anyway, I just wanted to say that your poetry is cool and God bless you.

January 8, 2006 22:00egyptian_girl

love it! gr8 poem!

January 9, 2006 05:05 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Thanks! :)

January 9, 2006 22:15 Kirsty (living in the light)

Hi Glostarg sorry but my mum wont let me email you yet maybe when I am older. Sorry!! I have jsut had the weirdest time with my mentor who helps with faith and stuff. She gave us both the same amount of money to go into a shop and pick two fin things each and we came out with pearl barley, lemon, elastic bands and a chocolate lollipop. Random!! GOD is soo alive in my friend it is amazing and over the last year I have grown so much in my faith. God bless you I pray this year goes well for you. Bye.

January 10, 2006 04:08 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Thank you for your woishes and ofcorse i wish the same for you. I was going to send you a card for winning the poem contest in school, but it is fine a well wish is just the same. I suppose I was not thinking about security of chat, yet your mother told you absolutely right. I am glad you listen to her so well! May God Bless you and your work always. bye for now

January 10, 2006 04:08 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

*wishes

January 10, 2006 21:27 Kirsty (living in the light)

DOnt worry I listen to my mum cause she is lovely. I am so not in a good mood I jsut want to scream to God. Why can't things go right!!! Is it me or what???

January 12, 2006 06:00 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Kirsty,we all encounter these trying times in our christian walk. doesn't mean that you did something wrong or bad, unless you know otherwise. Do trust in Jesus and his strength.
After all that he suffered for us, we can surely handle a few temptations now.Pray. It hels alot! God Bless You in your trying times Kirsty. remember in your weakness ,Jesus is shown strong,for at those times he carries you!God Bless You

January 14, 2006 11:29 Kirsty (living in the light)

Glostarg I pushed this kid over at school and though we are friends now i cant forgive or trust myself now to not lose my temper in that way again

February 15, 2006 21:37Taurusteen23

I love your poetry....you never fail to come out with something beautiful! Can't wait to read more...

February 16, 2006 01:38 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Thank you Taurusteen23! glostarg

September 18, 2006 15:51Dimplegirl

good one

November 18, 2006 04:03itty bitty

I really love this poem! i agree with all them other peoples, you are an awesome poet! I'm glad I picked this one out to read first... :) ~L.R.R.

April 9, 2007 10:46liberty moon

hey glo i sent you a very long e mail i hope you get it. this is an amazing poem great job

May 30, 2007 13:40Chuck Shorter

Magnifique! Now that's what I call togetherness. God Gloria, this one really touched the very depths of my heart.
Luv
Chuck

December 11, 2009 00:42~♥miss crazy♥~

i love it :)