Calm midst the storm

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By lost the lonely dead •

Torrents of events rain down Looking up the eye visible Stuck in a rock and a hard place Will i survive this storm? A waves curles up ready to pounce Mustering all strengths hanging tight Holding on for a hope of sunshine Hail thrashing my plans of harvest Prayers answered only with thunder Wind making my head swim confused Will i survive this storm? The stom unrelenting yet dulls Pulling together my thoughts tight Grasping the reality of hopelessness Resolve pummeling the storm's fight Watching the light midst the tunnel Numbness colliding with my senses I must survive this storm New direction still brainstorming Questions finding answers slowly Painfully accepting these truths

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May 12, 2006 03:26Faith

It's true, you do like imagery in your poems. I must admit you do have a gift, i can picture everything in my mind... well done! Oh, and i would give you a 9, but for some stupid reason my computer doesn't let me vote! ARGH!!!

May 12, 2006 04:23lost the lonely dead

well to be honest i personally thought it was a little pathetic when i first wrote it, i guess because it seemed over-dramatized to me somehow yet i do like a few things i stumbled upon in it thanks faith, i may re-write this one day...im fond of doing that

October 7, 2006 22:23Loneliness is condescending

i guess i like this

October 8, 2006 04:35lost the lonely dead

i still think it might need some work