Remains

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By Snapped •

Snap my bonal structure, Unhook my joints, Look into the anatomy, Pull the veins, rip out my muscles, Stab my heart, And make it bleed... Slice my arteries, Suck the blood out clean, Drain the misery of my mind, Stamp out the tissues, Hang me to dry, It’s all that remains when you walked out of my life!

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December 21, 2005 18:58Faith

Ouch... they must have really, really hurt you. Interesting poem.

December 22, 2005 15:07A Lonely Song

Wow. Once again amazing poem. I'm sorry for the pain you have or had.

Peace, Love, and Happiness.
Courtney

December 22, 2005 19:00Awakening Me

I can feel your pain in this poem. I hope time will be able to heal his wound and the pain you are feeling will be numbed a bit.

December 27, 2005 05:22AndTheTreeWasHappy

I like how you used so many physical descriptions to contrast and yet complement the emotional pain. Nice work.

January 4, 2006 01:29Crimson.Wings

wow

January 8, 2006 05:29lost the lonely dead

disturbingly nice