How A Memory Is Made

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By Trish •

A memory is made in a moment Imprinted not only in our minds But etched in the fibers of our hearts A scent, A color, A sound, A name May cause recessed, faded images of grey To take life and spring forward Suddenly its as if you were transported All the way back to that moment The moment a memory was made

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December 23, 2005 15:17Snapped

wow dudette, that is brilliant, i love the whole circle effect, at the start and the finish almost same sentance. awesome

December 24, 2005 22:48SwEEt MeMORiEs

great job. i lovee it!!

January 2, 2006 20:10*Diamond Rose Petals*

love it. adore it. enjoyed it

January 4, 2006 00:07Dimplegirl

Very NIce !!!

January 4, 2006 20:48Crimson.Wings

this is such a cool poem! i agree w/ wat "snapped" said, the circle effect is neat

January 9, 2006 05:19Trish

I really appreciate all of your comments. I stopped writting for a while because of some personal things, but I'm back at it. A little rusty but back at it. I only wish that I had some of my old material to let you read.

February 2, 2006 04:31Trish

Great news for any one reading this, this poem has been selected to be published. And its a finalist in a contest I would not have entered it if it wasn't for all your warm comments. Thankyou