My Loneliness

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By *razor_blades_&_kisses*

Loneliness is not a feeling,it's a state of mind.when I'm lonely I'm all alone,feeling angry or upset,and no one is there to help me.No one to hold my hand through the hard times.No one to tell me that it'll be ok.No one there to hear me when I cry,and no one to share my feelings with.No one to hear when I scream.No one to wipe my tears away.No one to see me pierce my skin with a razor.Loneliness it's a state of mind.It's something I feel when no one's there.when no one's there to heal the damage that's been done.no one here to see the scars or the heartache I have.Loneliness is not a feeling it's a state of mind.

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March 24, 2005 03:05wishing_on_stars

Very deep. Feel like that sometimes, right now, actually. Great poem.

June 23, 2005 21:41Crimson.Wings

i like the way u express your feelings. that's what makes a good poem.

September 5, 2005 11:48DONNA

I FELT THAT WAY NOT KNOWING WHAT TO AND IT CAME TO THE CRUNCH WERE I WAS LEFT OUT AND BULIED SO MUCH I CUT UP MY LEG WITH RAZOR BUT I GOT HELP AND TOLD MY MUM WHOS GOING TO FIND ME ANOTHER SCHOOL I FEEL BETTER NOW BUT EVERY SCHOOL I WENT TO I GOT PICKED ON

February 26, 2006 22:52Craney

It is very good

December 15, 2006 10:51~ Gemz ~

You portray the emotion behind your writing very well, and I can relate to the subject a lot. Well Done!

January 6, 2010 16:11toto

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