Strugle for Death

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By GDDY •

Anguished with despair I've been comsumed with darkness that fills my grief which bleeds like the moonlight upon the sky So shallow like my soul that cries and cries, mock my words i wouldnt dare to compare with just a stare ill share my air like the death fog that enters your nare the painful sight and smell that is so attractive i leave them out and hide in darkness darkness is where i hide and ill stay forever til the end of time leave me alone i dont care i just want to die.

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January 4, 2006 01:53Dimplegirl

I love You Poem.. Very Strong written.. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!

January 4, 2006 02:09HangmanTheory

Very explanitory and good sensory details. I like it.

January 4, 2006 17:58*Diamond Rose Petals*

hmm...its depressing but very well written.