LILY, by Trish Subscribe to rss feed for Trish 

LILY WITH SKIN SO FAIR
BIG BLUE EYES
AND FLAMING RED HAIR

A SECRET ON YOUR LIPS 
YOUR LITTLE FIST
SET ON YOUR HIPS

YOU THINK SO MUCH OF ME
SWEET DAUGHTER LILY
THERE IS SO MUCH YOU DON'T SEE

ALL MY BAD FAULTS
THE MANY MANY 
SECRETS LOCKED IN VAULTS

I WISH I WERE MORE LIKE YOU
BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTFUL AND KIND
WITH A LOVING HEART THAT IS TRUE

BUT YOU LOVE JUST THE SAME
I GUESS YOU CAN'T SEE 
YOUR MOTHER IS INSANE

I HAVE LOST HOPE
I HAVE LOST YOU
I CANNOT COPE


THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS SO PLEASE BARE WITH ME
Posted: 2006-01-04 04:50:16 UTC
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2006-01-10 02:40:25Faith
Not too bad... although every word in capitals makes it kinda hard to read... like you're yelling the whole poem or something.

2006-01-10 20:34:15Trish
No I just didn't realize the caps lock was on. Its just a rough draft. Tahnks though

2006-01-17 16:22:26~*PuRely*DeVine*~
can you explain this a little to me trish? so i can understand exactly what you are writing about? i see its about your daughter but i dont understand the end

2006-03-09 00:13:04Lillian
Work in progress is constantly what everything I do in life is, haha. What caught my eye about this was the name Lily, because it's my favorite. I once wrote a jazz song about a girl named Lily, and now I'm thinking I should post the small amount of words it has. I love the way you described her. Cute kid.. at least that's what I think she is!