LILY

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By Trish •

LILY WITH SKIN SO FAIR BIG BLUE EYES AND FLAMING RED HAIR A SECRET ON YOUR LIPS YOUR LITTLE FIST SET ON YOUR HIPS YOU THINK SO MUCH OF ME SWEET DAUGHTER LILY THERE IS SO MUCH YOU DON'T SEE ALL MY BAD FAULTS THE MANY MANY SECRETS LOCKED IN VAULTS I WISH I WERE MORE LIKE YOU BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTFUL AND KIND WITH A LOVING HEART THAT IS TRUE BUT YOU LOVE JUST THE SAME I GUESS YOU CAN'T SEE YOUR MOTHER IS INSANE I HAVE LOST HOPE I HAVE LOST YOU I CANNOT COPE THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS SO PLEASE BARE WITH ME

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January 10, 2006 02:40Faith

Not too bad... although every word in capitals makes it kinda hard to read... like you're yelling the whole poem or something.

January 10, 2006 20:34Trish

No I just didn't realize the caps lock was on. Its just a rough draft. Tahnks though

January 17, 2006 16:22~*PuRely*DeVine*~

can you explain this a little to me trish? so i can understand exactly what you are writing about? i see its about your daughter but i dont understand the end

March 9, 2006 00:13Lillian

Work in progress is constantly what everything I do in life is, haha. What caught my eye about this was the name Lily, because it's my favorite. I once wrote a jazz song about a girl named Lily, and now I'm thinking I should post the small amount of words it has. I love the way you described her. Cute kid.. at least that's what I think she is!