Elegy over a tired citizen, by Sylvian
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To Live - To Die
To Smile - To Cry
To Love - To Hate
Too Late - Good Bye |
| Posted: 2006-01-10 23:56:54 UTC |
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| 2006-01-11 01:03:46 | Faith |
| It reminds me of a haiku, short and to the point. Well done, i like it very much. |
| 2006-01-18 12:14:33 | Sylvian |
| Not much in common with haiku, a haiku must follow strict rules of construction (and in my opinion should not be written in anything but Japanese) and carry a deeper meaning. But thanks for the comment. |
| 2006-09-25 08:26:41 | User |
| Hmmmm....a very interesting form.. |