Elegy over a tired citizen
By Sylvian •
To Live - To Die
To Smile - To Cry
To Love - To Hate
Too Late - Good Bye
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January 11, 2006 01:03Faith
It reminds me of a haiku, short and to the point. Well done, i like it very much.
January 18, 2006 12:14Sylvian
Not much in common with haiku, a haiku must follow strict rules of construction (and in my opinion should not be written in anything but Japanese) and carry a deeper meaning. But thanks for the comment.
September 25, 2006 08:26User
Hmmmm....a very interesting form..
October 30, 2006 15:31Sylvian
Thanks