Bubble

By Kellz •
By Kellz •
Current vote: 6.7 / 5
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very charming and clever !! I enjoyed it.
Kewl!
thanks for the kind words.
Thats a very powerful and creative poem! I really love your use of words and the way you describe the intense feeling of being sprung out of your bubble! Very nice, I loved it. I give you a 10!
Ah sorry, a 9.
i agree with queen it is very clever for 5 minutes of work, quite a feat
thats really good for a 5 min work.. I think you are really talented. So keep up the good work!
thank you The Girl I Knew for your kind words and for taking the time to read my poem!
whoa! thank u for this poem. i just want to say create ur own bubble thats how i keep sane in this corupted world.
thanks liberty.
very very good.i can relate .
Great Poem! Really good for 5-8 minutes!
I think you're talking about Dissociative identity disorder, rather than schizioprenia...because the two are different. Anyway...nice poem!
YOU DID GOOD I CAN WRITE MY POEMS FAST TOO(SMILES)