Getting through to you, by My_pain_your_thrill |
Why wont you talk to me? I try to catch you as you’re falling, And it’s my name you’re calling, I hold on, my grip is weak, And now I cant even speak, Screaming through my tears, As my life fills with fears, How is it possible to love you so much? When I feel so badly like just giving up, You know I’d never do that though, I’m with you through the highs and lows, I hold your little broken heart, As your whole world falls apart, It breaks my heart to see you cry, It hurts so much to watch you die, Baby brother, look after your life, I can not go through this pain and strife, Again, and every single day, Wishing that somehow you’d take it away, I have nothing to do but watch you fall, And try to answer as you start to call, If I could, I’d never once let you stray, Fight against this game you continue to play, I hold it together once more, And stay calm while you run for the door, I look into your tired eyes, Hope that you’ll listen to my cries, But you never do, There is no way of getting through to you. |
Posted: 2006-01-18 13:49:13 UTC |
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2006-01-21 13:26:21 | Kirsty (living in the light) |
I like this poem it is so strong and emotional. In answer to a comment you sent I am not an amazing person I have my own problems too, I have felt suicidal but then I remeber that there are people who need me. Oh I forgot to tell you I care for you and am still praying for you. I am only 13 but I still love people so much and feel their need I feel your need to know God but you feel you can't I wish you could because it is so amazing to know that he loves you as much as his own son. I am not writing all this to convert just to let you know that there are people in this world who really do care for you I promise. |
2006-01-26 18:49:08 | Faith |
Wow! I love it, even though it's depressing. It makes me wonder what the story is behind it. |
2006-01-27 13:29:23 | Di@mond_Te@rs |
awhh it's really sad, but an amazing poem, your so good at writing hunni! x x gracey x x |
2007-08-20 09:55:28 | Trish" |
I love your poem! excellently done |