Laugh, by Kellz
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If I can make you laugh
for a while longer I can hide
all the pain and turmoil
I keep buried deep inside
A few humourous words
and maybe a tiny smile
and maybe I can distract myself
and forget my pain a while
If I can keep you laughing
you won’t worry bout how I am
So I’ll try to be funny
As long as I possibly can
8/25/2G4 Wed 2:28am |
| Posted: 2005-01-03 07:22:06 UTC |
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| 2005-03-22 05:21:49 | Melissa |
| you laugh poem is good but you should let people care about you i know i should do what i am telling you also but it is difficult to let people know so just keep your head up! ...do you still feel this way? write me back at: [email protected] my name is Melisa |
| 2005-04-21 19:50:27 | abs |
| this peom is beautiful its the only one i have given a 9! youve condensed a feeling into a few lines that most people couldnt explain in a page. i love it, it almost brought a tear to my eye. |
| 2005-05-30 21:04:30 | XLilSexxyX |
| I love this poem! I wish i was as good of a poet as u r! |
| 2005-06-12 16:25:30 | Loreleen |
| this is cute and i liked it alot |
| 2005-09-29 15:13:31 | rory t |
| i hate it when your falling apart inside and you have to pretend to be ok. great poem! xx |
| 2007-02-20 06:02:02 | Kellz |
| thanks to everyone who has read my poem. i'm sorry it's been so long since ive been here to respond. |
| 2007-04-19 00:01:32 | Angel of Music |
| Great poem! I really like the way you expressed the idea of it. |
| 2008-11-20 02:12:06 | Tim Pozzi |
| wow,
that's heartbreakingly beautiful. good work! |
| 2009-10-17 04:23:14 | *Broken Wings* |
| I really like this poem cause a lot of people wear mask to hide there feelings and i think this poem states it. |