Laugh

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By Kellz •

If I can make you laugh for a while longer I can hide all the pain and turmoil I keep buried deep inside A few humourous words and maybe a tiny smile and maybe I can distract myself and forget my pain a while If I can keep you laughing you won’t worry bout how I am So I’ll try to be funny As long as I possibly can 8/25/2G4 Wed 2:28am

Current vote: 8.5 / 5

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March 22, 2005 05:21Melissa

you laugh poem is good but you should let people care about you i know i should do what i am telling you also but it is difficult to let people know so just keep your head up! ...do you still feel this way? write me back at: [email protected] my name is Melisa

April 21, 2005 19:50abs

this peom is beautiful its the only one i have given a 9! youve condensed a feeling into a few lines that most people couldnt explain in a page. i love it, it almost brought a tear to my eye.

May 30, 2005 21:04XLilSexxyX

I love this poem! I wish i was as good of a poet as u r!

June 12, 2005 16:25Loreleen

this is cute and i liked it alot

September 29, 2005 15:13rory t

i hate it when your falling apart inside and you have to pretend to be ok. great poem! xx

February 20, 2007 06:02Kellz

thanks to everyone who has read my poem. i'm sorry it's been so long since ive been here to respond.

April 19, 2007 00:01Angel of Music

Great poem! I really like the way you expressed the idea of it.

November 15, 2007 12:58Beth aka Anonymous

I like this..I can identify with it.

November 20, 2008 02:12Tim Pozzi

wow,
that's heartbreakingly beautiful. good work!

October 17, 2009 04:23*Broken Wings*

I really like this poem cause a lot of people wear mask to hide there feelings and i think this poem states it.