Lonely Hearts, Broken Mind

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By Kalie

He sat in his room Strumming his guitar Thinking of the girl Who broke his heart. The chords go black His heart crys As the guitar wept For the forgotten love For the love that was lost, Broken for all time, His lonely heart. She lays on her bed Curled into the wall The music plays The sad, lonely songs Her heart feels dead But her mind is screaming She broke his heart She's lost his love Now shattered, now torn She weaps tears of blood Her broken mind...

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January 24, 2006 17:58Faith

I like how you show the point of view from both sides... i wrote a poem like this, it's called "Contrary (part 1 & 2)".