The Ripples of Elizabeth

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By punchenella

In Norway, Elizabeth was born. I did not speak her language, But she shared a nut with me anyway. A straight from the tree hazelnut, Elizabeth, Me. Green and hard-shelled we cracked. Our jaws became traditional tools And we ate. We ate the path, muddy and steep Well worn with bridges over quick trickle-trickle. We filled our water bottles here And continued to hike for . . . Well . . . time didn't matter at all. We ate the grass, that green grass So alive in the valley and the wet stones That lay by the waterside. We showered in fresh falls dancing On fallen trees in the rain; No drama, no games. And the ripples of Elizabeth disappeared When I came back to America.

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January 24, 2006 02:14Faith

You have a unique way with words... interesting

January 25, 2006 00:02Spiritual Beauty

i agree with faith

January 25, 2006 00:10punchenella

thank both of you, I appreciate the feedback, but "interesting" is one of those words that has taken on several meanings, and I don't know if I understand it anymore. XXXX with respect, P

October 2, 2006 08:41User

Like some kind of fables or what..I kind of like it though I don't actually get it..

May 7, 2011 21:03suzieQ

Dude. this is awesome! I have had enough of poems with little to no rhyme scheme but you rocked it. Nicely done