This Tunnel of Night(12), by ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
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Though dimly lit
And earthen trod
The walls of white have since been shod
With trails of time with unwatched care,
These travelers here seemed not impaired
To view the light above the stairs
Which beacons to them
Come up here
Renew yourself in ways of height
So envigored you will take flight
Free yourself of this tunnel of night.
© Copyright 2006 Glostarg .All rights Reserved
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| Posted: 2008-04-22 22:17:46 UTC |
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| 2006-01-26 18:10:36 | Kirsty (living in the light) |
| Ahhh! I love this soo much, it really talks to me because recently I have been thinking about family issues and friend issues and like this just spoke to me. You are an amazing person not me!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2006-01-26 20:49:37 | Faith |
| Sooooo good! You are such an encouragement to me Gloria, in your poems & in your comments. You definitly have a gift with words, have you tried publishing any of your poems? You really should! |
| 2006-01-26 21:42:34 | Kirsty (living in the light) |
| Hi Gloria, ummm... I have French Student next week. Also umm... I am doing the second round of the poetry contest on Monday please pray for me. |
| 2006-01-27 05:03:38 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| Faith, Hi and Thank you for those wonderful coments about this poem.It is so good to hear such nice things about this poem.I actually wrote this in a matter of moments the other night.In this contest I was to look at a picture and write about that pic in a poem.too bad i had to join pay and just didnt feel like paying for that contest. so i posted it here. oh yeah that picture was of a dirty white painted tunnel in a wet and dark looking place while at the top of stairs there hung a single light bulb and clean white walls.yes I got a picture of salvation in this instance too! :)... in love of christ Glo... |
| 2006-01-27 05:05:38 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| Kirsty I am glad you liked this poem! thanks for all of your encouragment too! your still amazing! :) |
| 2006-01-30 06:52:56 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| Thanks Junior walker, for all of your encouraging words! God Bless You! glostarg |
| 2006-02-07 23:20:42 | Kirsty (living in the light) |
| I feel so low because my friend is leavin and I can't free myself from this tunnel of night my emotions are everywhere
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| 2007-03-13 08:36:59 | User |
| A very nice poem..!!Amazing..!! |