This Tunnel of Night(12)

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By <font color= "white"> ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ •

<font color="navy"><b> Though dimly lit And earthen trod The walls of white have since been shod With trails of time with unwatched care, These travelers here seemed not impaired To view the light above the stairs Which beacons to them Come up here Renew yourself in ways of height So envigored you will take flight Free yourself of this tunnel of night. © Copyright 2006 Glostarg .All rights Reserved

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January 26, 2006 18:10 Kirsty (living in the light)

Ahhh! I love this soo much, it really talks to me because recently I have been thinking about family issues and friend issues and like this just spoke to me. You are an amazing person not me!!!!!!!!!!

January 26, 2006 20:49Faith

Sooooo good! You are such an encouragement to me Gloria, in your poems & in your comments. You definitly have a gift with words, have you tried publishing any of your poems? You really should!

January 26, 2006 21:42 Kirsty (living in the light)

Hi Gloria, ummm... I have French Student next week. Also umm... I am doing the second round of the poetry contest on Monday please pray for me.

January 27, 2006 05:03 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Faith, Hi and Thank you for those wonderful coments about this poem.It is so good to hear such nice things about this poem.I actually wrote this in a matter of moments the other night.In this contest I was to look at a picture and write about that pic in a poem.too bad i had to join pay and just didnt feel like paying for that contest. so i posted it here. oh yeah that picture was of a dirty white painted tunnel in a wet and dark looking place while at the top of stairs there hung a single light bulb and clean white walls.yes I got a picture of salvation in this instance too! :)... in love of christ Glo...

January 27, 2006 05:05 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Kirsty I am glad you liked this poem! thanks for all of your encouragment too! your still amazing! :)

January 27, 2006 14:54 Kirsty (living in the light)

oh argh I am not amazing

January 28, 2006 23:43 *****Junior Walker*****

Good poem,especially for 1 written in a matter of moments

January 30, 2006 06:52 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Thanks Junior walker, for all of your encouraging words! God Bless You! glostarg

February 6, 2006 02:57Crimson.Wings

This is a very beautiful poem!

February 7, 2006 23:20 Kirsty (living in the light)

I feel so low because my friend is leavin and I can't free myself from this tunnel of night my emotions are everywhere

March 13, 2007 08:36User

A very nice poem..!!Amazing..!!