Slow Motion, by stolen soul
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my life is in slow motion to me because im never noticed
only by my few friends am I noticed every one who passes
by me never really sees me its like im invisble to most
people that is why my life is in slow motion.
By: Trav |
| Posted: 2006-01-29 18:48:47 UTC |
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| 2006-01-29 18:39:47 | Love Dragon |
| Nice! it is true. you should read some of my poems. some have the smae meaning.
Ash |
| 2006-01-30 23:13:09 | B.H.D.S |
| Hi,
I thought it was perfect
And you are not invisible I mean alot of people like you I mean I do alot
Really I think you would make the perfect boy friend for me
HOTTSTUFF197261 |
| 2006-04-14 05:27:16 | |
| Poetry is a great way to show emotion, and no one is bad at it! You just write what you feel and think, just let the words flow from you, to the pencil/pen, and to the paper (Or from you to the keyboard!) I really like this one and I can relate. Keep writing and stop worrying! |