Revelations, by FrostedCold
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When first I saw you
something stirred within me
could this be?
Feelings that were thought lost.
Patiently I watched us grow closer,
and as if by miracle
we lay under the stars together
each knowing
something new had begun.
We are so alike, yet so different.
Two pieces of a puzzle.
Two hearts brought together by grace.
Love is a dull word compared
to the feelings stirring inside.
I cannot imagine
myself, without you. |
Posted: 2006-01-31 01:46:04 UTC |
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2006-02-09 19:45:11 | Faith |
You are a better poet than you would like to believe... |
2006-02-09 19:45:17 | Faith |
You are a better poet than you would like to believe... |
2006-06-27 04:59:37 | User |
Simple yet beautiful..especially the last stanza that says "Love is a dull word compared to the feelings stirring inside"..I like this one most..
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2010-03-11 15:25:15 | Convalescence |
I like this, esspecially the last line, because it completely sums it up. "I cannot imagine myself without you." Really great work. |