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By <font color=lilac>FrostedCold •

When first I saw you something stirred within me could this be? Feelings that were thought lost. Patiently I watched us grow closer, and as if by miracle we lay under the stars together each knowing something new had begun. We are so alike, yet so different. Two pieces of a puzzle. Two hearts brought together by grace. Love is a dull word compared to the feelings stirring inside. I cannot imagine myself, without you.

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February 4, 2006 10:00 Kirsty (living in the light)

I love this poem, It is very good. Well, better then good.

February 4, 2006 23:17Crimson.Wings

this is a beautiful poem.

February 9, 2006 19:45Faith

You are a better poet than you would like to believe...

February 9, 2006 19:45Faith

You are a better poet than you would like to believe...

June 27, 2006 04:59User

Simple yet beautiful..especially the last stanza that says "Love is a dull word compared to the feelings stirring inside"..I like this one most..

March 19, 2007 23:48.:side:walk:.

Brilliant poem! I love this!

September 9, 2007 23:23Angel of Music

Hey this is really good! Great job!

May 5, 2009 01:48Janae_WITH pasion

this is great....good job

March 11, 2010 15:25Convalescence

I like this, esspecially the last line, because it completely sums it up. "I cannot imagine myself without you." Really great work.