Tears And Blood

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By << Red Ink >>

2004-09-24 12:22:28 (GMT) Pain is something you can't hold But it's between my arms and its have grown It's screaming, crying and shouting why won't it stop? There's fire in my eyes and a tear suddenly drops I see it killing me, burning me inside out I tried to throw it out But it's holding me, choking me and garbing my heart I have to be reasonable But I'm uncapable I've never seen such wounds They're real I can feel them with my hands and they're my own My eyes are droping blood It turned to a flood I ran to my room and traped myself Thrown all the books from the shelf Washed it with saulty water Why do I hide? I want to get rid of my life But is there something else to live for? I can find one and even more and I'm sure Make life a better place to live And everything would fit All wounds will turn to old and forgotten scars It will be a long way and so far But I have to hold faith And throw all the pain Think of God while looking at the sky Then all the tears and blood will dry N.B.

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March 21, 2005 05:11Melissa

your spelling is kinda bad in this one but your why i'm crying now was really good it makes me think of the problem i an having right now and i dont know how to deal with it. it really sux to have that feeling that there is no where to go and nothing to do once you have lost your true friend to (what feels like the devil).

April 16, 2005 15:31The Irish Child

Wow.. this is pretty kewl. It reminds me of a friend that I have.. yea. I liked this 1...

May 11, 2005 07:28FirePoet

Impressive piece.
a vivid mental picture. Enjoyed the read

June 27, 2005 01:14Cutebunnywithfangz

Very strong piece. Stays right on topic. Truly spell binding.

August 24, 2005 14:17a rose by any otha name

mesmerizing

June 6, 2007 23:53.:side:walk:.

I am going through the same thing right now, I understand, it's pretty hard. I love your poem!

:'( Aww this one got me too...:'( i understand...

:'( Aww this one got me too...:'( i understand...

dayumm all your poems are wonderful