Kiss Of Death

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By <b><i>*Diamond Rose Petals*

Kiss Of Death Kiss Of Death By:Miaya Jackson ,.,;.~``~'.,.;.~``~'..',,.;~~`;'..,. Slowly & Dangerous liken to a beast moving with a graceful yet sickly peace Softly dancing, to it's forbidden sound while death enters in to the mortal relam Sings a song, that deafens the ears Yet blinds the sight of all who hears rocks you gently into a suicidal dream lures you to a dying forest, steps blindly, unseen Swipes your breath with a kiss so deadly, yet sourly sweet a kiss that brings hundreds to somenly weep.

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February 3, 2006 15:46EmbraceLucidity

i think you have a super sweet talent for writing...
Sings a song, that deafens the ears
Yet blinds the sight of all who hears
rocks you gently into a suicidal dream
lures you to a dying forest, steps blindly, unseen...
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February 3, 2006 22:42*Diamond Rose Petals*

wow, thankyou! thats the best comment ive gotten. i really appreciate it!:D

February 4, 2006 22:47Crimson.Wings

this is such a beautiful poem. good job.

January 24, 2008 05:33wife2be

beautiful