Message to a Friend

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By Natalie

I can never feel you, My hands are so cold, And your's are so distant, And numb and sold. Can you see right through me? You're not thick if you can't. For i have thoughts, Not even i understand. I cant keep this up, I'm tearing me up, Like a piece of paper, Your a blank piece of paper. So, i cant even read you, Your never there, Your always with her, She's always there. And even when its just us, She's always there, Your always with her, Your never there. Would you like me to leave? All you do is ask. I will gladly leave, When you leave my heart.

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February 18, 2006 19:30Jessicaa

Good poem! You said you could relate to my poem, but I do relate to your poem too!

Good work!

August 6, 2007 07:35ChuKico PrIme

awwww... i can totally relate to this. Great job!