first time in a long time (Ian)

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By broken&bruised_only.used •

This is kinda supposed to be a song but considering i can only write lyrics and not music i guess it could be considered a poem. For the first time in a long time im happy for the first time in a long time i forgot to call it seems your no longer the first one i run too this time i wont let you make me fall maybe this time im lying or maybe i made a mistake i know how you feel about what we had but i have nothing left for you to take and perhaps its been too long without you or maybe i just forgot to care you tell me that somehow you still love me so tell me why arent you there? and baby you gave up your chances god knows you had plenty of em left so let me be the one to walk away this time dont be the one to say that old line Im sick of these lies they hurt me im sick of just tryin to pretend ive thrown up my hands in hopes that you'll see me god knows we could never be just friends

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April 14, 2006 07:08Unknown

Hi! I think you're good at saying exactly what you want to, and show the right emotion, too. Very true also! I liked it.

October 3, 2008 02:48Josiah Hammond :)

wow very good it captivates me to read. emotion is just exploding from this poem. i would love to have some feedback on any of my poems if u would be so kind.