DEVOTION

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By <B><font color ="yellow">ChuKico PrIme</font></B>

People say nothing lasts forever, my love for you is an exception. Our relationship had ended with no warning, slicing my heart. Still thinking of you every moment with ever lasting devotion, I'll say "The day i stop loving you is the day it rains from earth." I used to think i have everything i want when you're by my side. When you're gone, i lost my pride and i'm not ME anymore. I uesd to think that you're the one who'll protect me all my life. Now i see it's a big mistake that you're the one who made me fall, Tell me i'm not good enough, tell me i'm not the one you love. But please don't say that i'm not the one who loves you. For every moment i live is filled with the thoughts of you. Everything you did is the best memories of my past left behind. I don't care how you left me, i can see you won't be back. Still it is true that you're the one i can never get off my mind.

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February 7, 2006 23:28 Kirsty (living in the light)

I also love this you have real talent.

February 18, 2006 00:15stolen soul

this is the best poem in the world sad but the best. =)

February 25, 2006 21:36blackflamingo

I agree with Kirsty.