Me &... I myself

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By <B><font color ="yellow">ChuKico PrIme</font></B>

The song of wind, rhythm of streams that can make your heart swing. Not one to share, I'm alone. Sense of freash leaves, sight of green weeds, although they're sweet, the day you left, i'm alone. Roars of beasts, coldness with no heat. However I'm scared, Who cares? No one's there. In the jungle of life, can't feel hell or paradise, Have i lost my pride? Will you come back? or Will i find my way? Wonderig with fear, Who will decide my fate?... I want it to be me, and it's must be.

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February 7, 2006 23:27 Kirsty (living in the light)

I can totally relate to this.

February 9, 2006 17:17~*~Magpie Von~*~

you're always leaving me comments, so now its my turn! YAY! I really like this one. I've felt much the same way.

~*~Magpie Von~*~

February 12, 2006 02:13 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Hi I really like this poem! and thank you for visiting my site and for your coments.

February 13, 2006 12:09Natalie

Hey. I really really liked this poem. And i enjoyed reading it. Please write more :)

February 18, 2006 00:06stolen soul

that was a great poem i really loved it & thank you for writeing to me you one of the best people on this site = )

February 22, 2006 02:20krystalblu

very relatable... i like it a lot.. thank you for your comments on mine

March 3, 2006 21:59egyptian_girl

i lov tht poem! good job!

March 21, 2006 05:26Crimson.Wings

this is beautiful... thanks for your comment