Holding on to today, by Kirsty (living in the light)
Kirsty (living in the light)">
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I reflect on today and how I wish I could just.. hold on a
bit more. I don't want it to end. I want to grasp it in my
hands and never let go, but I stare and watch as it slips
through my fingers.
I remember your smile and your laugh. I remember the
thoughts you shared but they are just effects from the flood
they aren't the day. I want to turn back the hands of the
clock and with it time. Maybe if time stood still when we
were in the Cafe. But now the day seems like a snow dome
that you shake and watch but aren't there.
Hot chocolate and laughter. Packing up ready to move
watching you slowly go further away. Wishing time would stop
and that we could dance on the edge of time. I don't like
this feeling of time slipping by. This feeling of life going
quick. I want to treasure this moment. This moment is so
precious. Tommorow is another day.......closer to you
leaving. |
Posted: 2006-02-14 00:29:02 UTC |
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2006-02-16 11:55:09 | |
Good job! I've felt this exact way so so many times. It's nice to have it put into words |
2006-02-22 01:35:07 | Faith |
So very true this poem is (whoa, i sounded like Yoda just then)... you've captured the emotions well. |
2008-11-10 05:54:32 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
Hi Kirsty, It was great to hear from you again. Great job on this poem! stay in touch. love you too Glo(((HUGS))) |
2009-05-28 07:29:34 | dispersed_sky |
you have done a fabulous job kristy...
full of emotions ,seems to me that this one is directly from your hearts ...
good luck!
"Afwah -the rumour" |
2009-12-30 19:42:08 | Convalescence |
How do u add color to you name like that?
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