Summer Sound(8)

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By <font color= "white"> ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ •

<font color="navy"><b> I was so rudely awakened, Loud sounds filled the air. Was startled and jolted From a sweet dream so fair. Threw off my covers, And put on my robe. Off to the backyard My limp body strode. This screeching differed, From any heard before, So I stopped to put on My shoes at the door. I wondered what calamity, This sound could bring, With that in mind, Went to gather my things. My eyes were fixed now, A broken hose spew. I knew what is was, But not what to do! This roaring laughter, Which rose to the skies, It was only children, Just playing outside! 2006 © Copyright Gloria/glostarg.All Rights Reserved.

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February 14, 2006 23:12 *****Junior Walker*****

Liked it,good poem,u have some serious art going on as well,probably the prettiest page on this site

February 15, 2006 03:43 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Hi Junior,
Thanks so much! I hope this art work isnt too much! It is just my way of letting everyone on here know how much I appreciate them. For all of the time I have been this site, so many nice people have reviewed my poems, although I do not know anyone very well on here(maybe a few I do know well)... but I feel it's a warm, caring environment to share my poetic and artistic works here.
God Bless You
glostarg

February 15, 2006 22:48Spiritual Beauty

nice poem, so cute:), by the way, i love the picture in ur site :)

February 25, 2006 03:40 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Thanks spiritual Beauty! Blessings to you!

March 11, 2006 04:18Lillian

This is only the first of your poems that I have read and it made me laugh so heartily! You are wonderful!

August 13, 2006 02:40.:side:walk:.

speechless, and not just for this poem, for all. You have amazing poems, they make me feel so peaceful because everytime I have a bad day (life hating says) , I would read one of your poems, and it would make me relize about my life and how I would want to live those moments on what you have wrote. However, I wrote a comment on this poem because I just moved from my "home sweet home", and this reminded me of the good times I have spent here. I was afraid that I won't have that feeling ever again and this poem gave me the idea. The Idea was about hope, and someday, I will find that feeling of my " home sweet home".

August 16, 2007 17:50Chuck Shorter

Hey Gloria!,
It's been awhile. Grat poem. I've given it a top rating cuz it's apoem that makes you understand that many a thing in life that we're initially scared of turns out to be something that's part of our daily routine!. would appreciate your feedback on my new poem "Dead or Alive?"
Luv
Chuck

January 19, 2008 06:24Sheila

I think its cute!!