She Closes Her Eyes to Stop the Tears, by I'm The Girl That Holds Everything Inside
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She breaths in
The pain is sharp
She's been stabbed
A sad song plays from the harp
The makeup runs down
Her expressionless face
All emotion is gone
She stares into space
Theres a red pool around her
Suddenly she gasps
Is this how it ends?
Why couldnt it last
More tears run
Out of her empty eyes
Her chin falls
The little girl dies
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| Posted: 2006-02-17 05:18:44 UTC |
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| 2006-02-18 17:20:54 | love nothing >>-- |
| WOW....I love it...so sad, and I feel I can relate. Love the darkness about it. and the sudden ending. will read your other poems too. propz XD |
| 2006-02-20 19:55:53 | Crimson.Wings |
| wow. this was very emotional. heartbreaking poem. i'm giving it a 9. |
| 2006-12-17 22:03:40 | me |
| wow!!I thought i could write well. You have a wonderful way of expressing your thoughts.The name of my thing is ME.you can look at mine if you want |
| 2007-11-22 01:26:30 | SMILING DARKNESS |
| aww that poem is so sad but i absolutly love it! U can really see the emotion |