She Closes Her Eyes to Stop the Tears

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By I'm The Girl That Holds Everything Inside

She breaths in The pain is sharp She's been stabbed A sad song plays from the harp The makeup runs down Her expressionless face All emotion is gone She stares into space Theres a red pool around her Suddenly she gasps Is this how it ends? Why couldnt it last More tears run Out of her empty eyes Her chin falls The little girl dies

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February 18, 2006 17:20love nothing >>--

WOW....I love it...so sad, and I feel I can relate. Love the darkness about it. and the sudden ending. will read your other poems too. propz XD

February 20, 2006 19:55Crimson.Wings

wow. this was very emotional. heartbreaking poem. i'm giving it a 9.

December 17, 2006 22:03me

wow!!I thought i could write well. You have a wonderful way of expressing your thoughts.The name of my thing is ME.you can look at mine if you want

December 22, 2006 18:52Just Eat My Heart Out

wow... this is very different... i like it, good job

November 22, 2007 01:26SMILING DARKNESS

aww that poem is so sad but i absolutly love it! U can really see the emotion