you were so wrong, by Acerbated
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you thought i was fine
but you were wrong
my life never divine
alone in the predawn
you thought i would heal
but you were wrong
my life, surreal
my mind never dead-on
you thought id live
but you were wrong
im still dying
my essence drawn
you thought id get over it
but you were wrong
you never really did commit
your mind always foregone
you thought id forgive you
but you were wrong
you broke my heart in two
now begone |
| Posted: 2007-05-16 03:29:19 UTC |
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| 2006-02-23 03:02:36 | krystalblu |
| very mature feelings for your age. i like it.. keep writing.... you'll do very well |
| 2006-02-23 23:52:26 | .:side:walk:. |
| LOVE THAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up writing your poems, they do portray about characteristic about how people feel! - mandy |
| 2006-03-22 07:39:03 | Natalie |
| Great!!! I like it! Keep on writing |