you were so wrong

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By Acerbated •

you thought i was fine but you were wrong my life never divine alone in the predawn you thought i would heal but you were wrong my life, surreal my mind never dead-on you thought id live but you were wrong im still dying my essence drawn you thought id get over it but you were wrong you never really did commit your mind always foregone you thought id forgive you but you were wrong you broke my heart in two now begone

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February 23, 2006 03:02krystalblu

very mature feelings for your age. i like it.. keep writing.... you'll do very well

February 23, 2006 03:28Acerbated

thanx

February 23, 2006 23:52.:side:walk:.

LOVE THAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up writing your poems, they do portray about characteristic about how people feel! - mandy

February 23, 2006 23:55Acerbated

thank you

March 22, 2006 07:39Natalie

Great!!! I like it! Keep on writing