Turn around

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By Daphne

You and me we met Never came across as perfect Between us there were always cracks And now it's just a turmulous wreck I never found myself this way before And now that I find this above all That everything we had was just raw We were meant to be down...to crawl Turn around you'll see me staring at you Turn around you'll catch me watching you Nothing beats harder than letting you go Seeing you out there in the cold Me not holding your hand I can never understand It was either me or you That just had something to do With breaking us up Or never letting us in I don't even know...where to begin You'll never hear me out...or can't you? You'll never let me in...or will you? I'll never know what this is about Unless for God's sake you make a sound

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March 13, 2006 18:31Faith

This poem sounds like me somtimes... well done, i like it!

April 1, 2006 05:14Unknown

It's easier for me to rhyme, too. As far as the poem goes, it was interesting with truth. A lot of people can relate!