Wrists, by ~Stay_Beautiful~20104 |
The blood, the pain... relief? Of pressure, stress, and grief? From all your problems and friends? With the blade, the pain ends? With a glide, the blood trickles, And all the emotion stiffles, But after that relief is gone, Do you see what you did wrong? Do the scars even mean a thing? Do you remember the painful sting? Do your troubles really fade? Or are they just hidden by the blade? Or is it that you just want to die? So you sit there, bleeding, and cry? Is life really that painfully hard, That you are willing to be scarred? So just talk to someone, and let them hear, Because, close by, there is a listening ear. So next time all the pain persists, Don't take it out on your wrists! |
Posted: 2009-07-10 05:05:17 UTC |
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2006-10-07 19:57:59 | *****Junior Walker***** |
very powerful poem you got there,liked it,has alot of feeling |
2006-10-09 14:57:22 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
This poem says it all! I have tried to understand the feelings of any who feel they must self harm. I also realise that their pain is immense and internally directed. My prayers are always representing those who find it hard to live in their body/mind of pain. I believe Christ suffered pain undescribable, yet he prevailed and has those scars to show for it. Scars can be a testament to a painful life or a life of transformation. Now, I think I have possibly said too much here , but your poem is very poignant! Good Job! |
2006-10-16 22:00:13 | Kirsty (living in the light) |
I have to say I like this poem. However, I am a self harmer, I cut and do other stuff to cause pain. Let me explain one thing, u r right in the end it doesnt help but for me those few moments that I bleed i find release. Yet, in the end it just boils down to nothing. I am on the road to recovery now and this poem seriously helps may i please print a copy and pin it up so when i have an urge i can refer back to it thanks. please let me know on a green poem bye |
2007-08-20 19:51:54 | xox_sweet_complication_xox |
wow i cant believe how amazingly grerat this poem is.!! its so true that its scary lol great job and thatnx for the comment |
2007-12-17 00:50:14 | SMILING DARKNESS |
That had a really good message. Its a good poem and rhymed really well! |
2007-12-23 08:27:18 | *Psychopathic Child* |
This is a very amazing and powerful poem i like it very much. It helps in many ways. thank you |
2008-05-11 02:28:10 | queen of melodrama |
wow, this is very good! you struck a cord with many people...including myself!! I loved the end! very clever!! |
2008-07-05 06:38:39 | Just Eat My Heart Out |
ehh.. i'm a cutter. i like this though. good job. 9. (: |
2009-01-12 17:25:58 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
this is indeed a very well written poem and has a strong message to it...you did a very good job on this poem. |
2011-06-17 20:03:31 | PenToPaper |
This is such a powerful poem. I used to cut and finally found help. I just love this so much. |