Under The Blanket of Darkness, by Chalan
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This feeling I have when I'm
around you is so weird.
Everything I imagined is not
as I had feared.
I should be feeling really
nervous and going crazy.
But when I'm with you I feel
so relaxed and really quite
lazy.
I know that this is wrong but
it feels so right
and there are so many possibilities
that are in sight.
Our love making feels like a magical
dream
Where under the blanket of darkness
passion and beads of sweat gleam.
This feels so comfortable and natural
as if it were meant to be.
And now I only wish that you were truly
With me. |
Posted: 2007-02-04 06:29:27 UTC |
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2007-02-10 17:04:22 | Lil'Fighter |
Wow! That is an amazing poem. In fact words can't even begin to describe how good or great it is. Great Job. :) |
2007-03-10 05:22:48 | FirePoet |
This an awesome read. Bravo!! |
2007-06-12 03:32:32 | User |
Wow..your poems are real great..!! |
2008-12-20 02:46:28 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
an extremely well written and comphrehendable poem i like this poem very much indeed...and thank you for your previous left comments they are very much appreciated...very nice poem.. |