Under The Blanket of Darkness

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By Chalan

This feeling I have when I'm around you is so weird. Everything I imagined is not as I had feared. I should be feeling really nervous and going crazy. But when I'm with you I feel so relaxed and really quite lazy. I know that this is wrong but it feels so right and there are so many possibilities that are in sight. Our love making feels like a magical dream Where under the blanket of darkness passion and beads of sweat gleam. This feels so comfortable and natural as if it were meant to be. And now I only wish that you were truly With me.

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February 10, 2007 17:04Lil'Fighter

Wow! That is an amazing poem. In fact words can't even begin to describe how good or great it is. Great Job. :)

March 10, 2007 05:22FirePoet

This an awesome read. Bravo!!

June 12, 2007 03:32User

Wow..your poems are real great..!!

December 20, 2008 02:46Tyler Cedric Golden

an extremely well written and comphrehendable poem i like this poem very much indeed...and thank you for your previous left comments they are very much appreciated...very nice poem..