my love, by liberty moon
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i want to lay in ur arms and forget about yesterday. i
want to look in ur eyes and dream of tomorrow. hold ur
hand on this journey long.
listen to your heart beat my lalaby song.
shielded from the pains of life, as i stand in the shade of
ur love.
look into my eyes and forget of yesterday's sorrow.
read the pages of my heart as you dance to the joys of
tomorrow.
this is the love i pray we'll have |
| Posted: 2007-07-18 15:15:16 UTC |
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| 2007-02-12 21:45:14 | Lil'Fighter |
| thanks for your comment to my poem. |
| 2007-02-26 18:05:54 | Lil'Fighter |
| Thank you for your comment to my poem it made me happy lol and your welcome...:) I love this poem of yours. |
| 2007-03-01 03:50:14 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| Hi Liberty Moon I sent a reply to your question to the email that you provided me with. Glo |
| 2007-03-29 15:34:21 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| RE: 2007-03-24 07:36:43 liberty moon
wow powerful stuff. glo i really believe that God will ur ability to write as a tool spread the gospel. may He bless u
Thank you for this coment on my poetry. It really means alot to have you say that to me. BTW, I am still looking foreward to getting that in depth email from you about your performing arts ministries. I have checked out the website though...It is just Awesome! thank you friend! and god greatly bless you in your works for Him!
always,
Glostarg |
| 2007-05-24 14:42:36 | Don't build lies on ice cubes. |
| I like this poem!! thank you so much for the comments you left me, it was very sweet! in answer to your question I study Law, but I would love to write!! |
| 2007-05-25 23:12:29 | mytruth |
| wow. cool.. |
| 2007-05-31 00:27:11 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| Hi Phindi I got your email but had trouble with my email service. I will write you back as soon as possible. Missing you, but know your out there doing some great performing arts ministries for the love of God.
keep in touch. Love Glo |
| 2007-06-08 06:04:19 | PinkFairy |
| ty for ur comment. i like his one ;) |
| 2007-08-13 20:30:10 | ^*~-S0uL-*-ChYld-~*^ |
| i also loved this poem too. n i'm glad you understood my version of 'my love' cuz alot of people get confused by wat im trying to say when i'm juss speakin from my love's perspective. lol but yea anyway u did really great with this one, alot of emotion is always gud! |
| 2007-08-27 20:10:25 | Sarah |
| Thanks for the coment. you are a good writer |
| 2008-01-20 21:55:07 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| Hi Phindi, I miss hearing from you! How are you? take care. (((HUGS))) Glo |
| 2008-03-11 15:49:33 | Dimplegirl |
| This poem is incredible.. I loved it!! keep up the good work! =) you are soo talented.. |
| 2009-01-13 17:37:56 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| this is a very beautiful poem...it very much reminds me of my love and I....uhhhh how i miss her....very good job on this poem... |
| 2009-03-14 04:40:21 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| Wow this poem is fantastic and so heartfelt in such a short amount of words! Good Poem! |
| 2009-07-24 16:49:57 | ♥ Leah ☺ |
| thanks for your comments great poem x |