my love

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By liberty moon •

i want to lay in ur arms and forget about yesterday. i want to look in ur eyes and dream of tomorrow. hold ur hand on this journey long. listen to your heart beat my lalaby song. shielded from the pains of life, as i stand in the shade of ur love. look into my eyes and forget of yesterday's sorrow. read the pages of my heart as you dance to the joys of tomorrow. this is the love i pray we'll have

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February 12, 2007 02:44Lil'Fighter

Great Poem!

February 12, 2007 21:45Lil'Fighter

thanks for your comment to my poem.

February 26, 2007 18:05Lil'Fighter

Thank you for your comment to my poem it made me happy lol and your welcome...:) I love this poem of yours.

March 1, 2007 03:50 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Hi Liberty Moon I sent a reply to your question to the email that you provided me with. Glo

March 13, 2007 17:26~*PuRely*DeVine*~

wow, beautiful!

March 29, 2007 15:34 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

RE: 2007-03-24 07:36:43 liberty moon
wow powerful stuff. glo i really believe that God will ur ability to write as a tool spread the gospel. may He bless u

Thank you for this coment on my poetry. It really means alot to have you say that to me. BTW, I am still looking foreward to getting that in depth email from you about your performing arts ministries. I have checked out the website though...It is just Awesome! thank you friend! and god greatly bless you in your works for Him!
always,
Glostarg

May 24, 2007 14:42Don't build lies on ice cubes.

I like this poem!! thank you so much for the comments you left me, it was very sweet! in answer to your question I study Law, but I would love to write!!

May 25, 2007 23:12mytruth

wow. cool..

May 31, 2007 00:27 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Hi Phindi I got your email but had trouble with my email service. I will write you back as soon as possible. Missing you, but know your out there doing some great performing arts ministries for the love of God.
keep in touch. Love Glo

June 8, 2007 06:04PinkFairy

ty for ur comment. i like his one ;)

August 13, 2007 20:30^*~-S0uL-*-ChYld-~*^

i also loved this poem too. n i'm glad you understood my version of 'my love' cuz alot of people get confused by wat im trying to say when i'm juss speakin from my love's perspective. lol but yea anyway u did really great with this one, alot of emotion is always gud!

August 27, 2007 20:10Sarah

Thanks for the coment. you are a good writer

January 20, 2008 21:55 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Hi Phindi, I miss hearing from you! How are you? take care. (((HUGS))) Glo

February 27, 2008 02:24a rose by any otha name

the poem is good, it is a beautiful begining

March 11, 2008 15:49Dimplegirl

This poem is incredible.. I loved it!! keep up the good work! =) you are soo talented..

January 13, 2009 17:37Tyler Cedric Golden

this is a very beautiful poem...it very much reminds me of my love and I....uhhhh how i miss her....very good job on this poem...

March 14, 2009 04:40Tyler Cedric Golden

Wow this poem is fantastic and so heartfelt in such a short amount of words! Good Poem!

July 24, 2009 16:49♥ Leah ☺

thanks for your comments great poem x

August 5, 2011 14:42My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO

this is a great poem!!!please can you maybe check out my poems??? thanks :) XO