Hate and Neglect, by Felicia
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Her arm bares the mark of hate and neglect she is numb and
cold but the soft steal blade reaches her wrist making a
long clean cut |
Posted: 2007-05-30 19:48:11 UTC |
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2007-05-30 21:24:25 | Angel of Music |
good job! this sound like it could be a part of your other poem "a single tear." Keep up the good work. |
2009-03-02 04:28:26 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
i do like this phrase and i apologize for asking you to read such a lengthy poem but in my opinion i thought you would very much enjoy it but i do appreciate your comment...Tyler |