A Single Tear
By Felicia •
Her hand are shaking wile she reaches for the cold steal blade with the life left in her she slides it across her narrow wrist covered in warm blood a single tear roles down her cheek
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May 30, 2007 21:22Angel of Music
good job. you are very discriptive.
March 2, 2009 04:31Tyler Cedric Golden
hmmm this little start of something could turn into something big as well i like it very much...and well to have a better outlook upon the way my poems are would you please read my poem (Riding Through the Burning Wind) which is shorter and may make you more interested in my writings...Tyler
March 26, 2009 02:23Chalan
I like this poem simply because you can feel the desperation in it and the hopelessness. I like it When the reader can feel what the writer is trying to express through their poems. Thank you very much for the constructive critism on my poems "Thank you" and "Why" I really do Enjoy hearing what people have to say about my poems and to get their opinion of them.