A Single Tear, by Felicia
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Her hand are shaking wile she reaches for the cold steal
blade with the life left in her she slides it across her
narrow wrist covered in warm blood a single tear roles down
her cheek |
| Posted: 2007-05-30 19:48:13 UTC |
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| 2009-03-02 04:31:32 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| hmmm this little start of something could turn into something big as well i like it very much...and well to have a better outlook upon the way my poems are would you please read my poem (Riding Through the Burning Wind) which is shorter and may make you more interested in my writings...Tyler |
| 2009-03-26 02:23:37 | Chalan |
| I like this poem simply because you can feel the desperation in it and the hopelessness. I like it When the reader can feel what the writer is trying to express through their poems. Thank you very much for the constructive critism on my poems "Thank you" and "Why" I really do Enjoy hearing what people have to say about my poems and to get their opinion of them. |