See The Dawn

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By Felicia •

I know i broke your heart But i loved you from the start I wanted to let you know But i was scared to let it show I turned down your kiss I know I'll never love like this Into the morning I will cry Till my tears they all run dry I know she loves you dear But thats exactly what i fear Its all to much to bare This life isn't fair I was living one big lie sometimes i wish i would die But life will go on I will see the dawn

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May 30, 2007 21:25Angel of Music

Good job. -luv Amanda

June 1, 2007 20:18Acushla

wow, i love it

March 8, 2009 01:05Tyler Cedric Golden

i would love to help you in anyway possible for you to continue your work and if reading anothers poem to get an idea helps then if you would like read my poem Riding Through the Burning Wind or Crept Up From Underneath, Or Lost Under Sands' Pressure or i dont know you choose because i think it will truly help give you ideas....and thank you for your previous comment and i do like the way you wrote this and i love the ending to show life shall always continue..great job!

March 22, 2009 05:29!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

BEAUTIFUL