Behind Her Smile

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By Felicia

Her tired sole bears heartache and pain And her broken heart tell all Behind her smile is a raging battle The spark no longer lights in her eyes And her laughter has died to all but none The pain has weathered her beautiful face Her frail body cries in the night And she lays is a puddle of cool sweat She is hurt inside but she will not let it prevail Felicia Mac Kinnon

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June 26, 2007 21:04THE ELIZABETHs

this is so cool. kisskisskiss THE ELIZABETHS

June 26, 2007 21:05A Lonely Song

great job.

March 11, 2008 18:58 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

beautiful excellence!

April 15, 2009 16:13Tyler Cedric Golden

simply remarkably said and words so very well used along with explaining the feeling this was really good...one of your best in my opinion....i just wrote this poem called (Left in these Streets) if you would like to read it..and also awhile back i asked your opinion upon my poem (The Unknown Cyclone) and didnt get a response...dont think im mad about it because im not i was just curious on whether you recieved the message or not.....anyways comment me sometime....Tyler