Dark Oblivion

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By Felicia

She feels bitter resentment for things of the past And the thought of yesterday stabs at her heart She tightens her fists and clenches her teeth She must not let her feelings escape Her heart vexed herd and her eyes flash rage She has no future her past is at hand Her hot breath upon the cool air Makes her realize what she must do Her lifeless body amid the bloody floor Shows a eternal mark across her slender neck Throughout her last few moments she feels at peace Then into the dark oblivion she fades Felicia Mac

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August 9, 2007 04:38xxSoulsxxLiexx

Beautiful wording

December 29, 2007 16:49User

I can definitely relate to this and I can feel the emotions here. I am going thru the same and still fighting hard to endure it. Hang on there!

March 2, 2009 04:38Tyler Cedric Golden

simply remarkable poem along with the descriptiveness and the fact that you can just picture and feel the outlook of this poem....fantastic job!

March 23, 2009 02:39!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

very dark & hopelessly well put