no changes, by shreya
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im cursing every song that reminds me of you,
cause memories r haunting me of a past i wish anew,
cause letting go is impossible as iv already seen
and i cant help but think of what could have been..
still as afraid as i was before,
still living with the same doubts,
still waiting for a change,
but when it comes i turn around,
i know its gonna help me,
but too tired to take that step,
and actually i know,
im secretly wating for something else.. |
Posted: 2007-07-19 11:41:24 UTC |
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2007-10-20 18:04:17 | Simply-Me-20104 |
Great poem! Very expressive! I'm sure a LOT of people can relate to this! |
2007-11-15 22:01:15 | Lydia |
yeah i really relate to it. great job : ) |
2009-02-18 17:27:21 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
i fixed the grammar problem u mention in one of my poems although it took awhile for me to let you know of this...well nonetheless great poem like the way it ended.... |
2009-12-20 09:12:47 | dispersed_sky |
u hv an enthusiasm ....u hv mde a way wid ur words..even as a single comma mke a diffrnce...ur poem contains..simple wrds bt it hd mde a diffrnce...
keep writing..
Afwah |