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By shreya

im cursing every song that reminds me of you, cause memories r haunting me of a past i wish anew, cause letting go is impossible as iv already seen and i cant help but think of what could have been.. still as afraid as i was before, still living with the same doubts, still waiting for a change, but when it comes i turn around, i know its gonna help me, but too tired to take that step, and actually i know, im secretly wating for something else..

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October 20, 2007 18:04Simply-Me-20104

Great poem! Very expressive! I'm sure a LOT of people can relate to this!

November 15, 2007 22:01Lydia

yeah i really relate to it. great job : )

December 25, 2007 05:39MissBeckyBoob

one word wow

May 18, 2008 01:16MissBeckyBoob

how delightfully awosome :)

February 18, 2009 17:27Tyler Cedric Golden

i fixed the grammar problem u mention in one of my poems although it took awhile for me to let you know of this...well nonetheless great poem like the way it ended....

December 20, 2009 09:12dispersed_sky

u hv an enthusiasm ....u hv mde a way wid ur words..even as a single comma mke a diffrnce...ur poem contains..simple wrds bt it hd mde a diffrnce...
keep writing..
Afwah